Audience Feedback to Raw Footage

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK TO RAW FOOTAGE:

From what we have recorded so far in terms of raw footage, we have added the soundtrack to accompany the on-screen moving images to get a feel of what the finished product could potentially look like. Our teacher suggested the following improvements:

- To commence the video with a shot of the lead singer in the recording studio, rather than starting the video with unsteady camera work > This will enhance the lip syncing element, so that the singer is mouthing the lyrics of the song.

- To arrange the shots in a chronological order, so that the audience can see the order of the singer's day out/mission to find his true love!

- To remove any footage which may be inappropriate or insignificant to the vision of the music video

- To avoid any use of black blank frames, unless it works effectively (e.g. when singer is on the bus).

This clip shows the lip syncing of our main actor. We have decided not to use this raw footage in our final music promotion video, as he does not appear to be miming correctly to the words of the song. Also, he is naturally laughing as most actors normally do in first-takes, so we have decided to not include this.

This clip allows us to see footage from the journey passage on the bus. We have decided not to include this passage in our final video as it does not properly encapsulate the essence of the scene. There is also general silliness but that aside, the camera appears to be lacking stability, possibly due to the speed that the bus is travelling at.